Essay Review

I was very please with the way my essay turned out. I hope to improve on it (and this year) by further exploring new ideas, solidifying my argument, and writing clearly. Moreover, as clear diction has been a problem of mine in the past, I am glad that I was able to move past my overly confusing sentences this essay. So, ultimately, I will continue this trend by putting in a continuous effort, like I did for this essay.

Peace out.

Bradalina

PS- Go see The Town and Never Let Me Go... yea.