Z for Zelda's essay is frustrating: it is well written, well presented, and well backed up; however, the essay is just too long and suffers from being too broad of a thesis. Specifically, because the 4 body paragraphs cover every character, the thesis seems stale and repeated- almost, in a sense, common sense after reading the book. Yet, at the same time, Zelda did an excellent job of constructing an essay around this topic.
Ultimately though, Zelda sacrifices her creativity in writing a 'risk-free' essay.
Get us interested at least, Zelda. Step your game up.
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